She lifted her head, drying her eyes.
"It's nothing. I'm okay."
"It doesn't seem like you're okay."
"Well, I am."
"But it doesn't seem--"
"But it doesn't seem--"
"You're not going to leave until I tell you, are you?"
Katherine crossed her arms, smiled and said,
"Nope!"
Delphia closed her eyes and sighed.
"Everyone thinks I'm a freak."
"I don't!"
"That's because you don't know."
"Know what?"
"I'm psychic."
I like this dialogue though it could definitely be improved. I like the twist at the end and the way the characters interact. I feel a good friendship in the words. I feel that the way this was written could be more creative and maybe a different scenario with more intensity. I don't know...Good job though!
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